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All good things…

by Ogechi Nwobia
April 11, 2020
in Short stories
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I met him on a Thursday. I remember because Thursdays are Anny’s days off and so Anny did not come to pick me from the office. I also remember because I had forgotten it was Thursday and I had worked really late, thinking Anny would be waiting downstairs at the close of work. Well, he wasn’t. And it was raining. And everyone had gone home.
I walked into the rain, tired, hungry and angry at myself. And well, Anny too. He would have at least picked up his phone and I would have convinced him to come pick me up. In retrospect though, I’m glad he didn’t.
I saw the yellow cab speed past me, raising a fountain of muddy water that bathed me as I stood in the rain on the sidewalk. I screamed and cursed the driver’s entire generation. Seconds later, the car pulled back and the most random looking guy I ever saw took the back glass down and invited me in. I put up a bit of drama but I eventually did get in.
The rest as they say is history. Well, pretty much.
Ojima turned out to be the guy that would blow my mind. Fancy dinner dates at pricy restaurants, late night conversations that never lost steam and the ultimate support I needed in the pursuit of my dreams. Ojima made me wonder why I ever doubted the existence of a crazy mind-blowing kind of love. He brought it to me.
That’s my summary of the past year. Now I’m watching Ojima from my car on the corner of his street. And it’s interesting because he’s not even supposed to be home. I had dropped him off at the airport this morning where he should have been boarding a flight to Kenya for a training. Apparently, Cole street is the new Kenya and I didn’t get the memo.
The lady who hands him a box of cake and who he kisses on the forehead has just my kind of build. So he’s got a spec? Interesting.
I curse Amaka in my heart. She’s the one who placed the call to swear that she had seen Ojima drive past her on Adeniran Ogunsanya. She sounded gleeful over the phone. Amaka didn’t believe in the kind of love Ojima and I shared. She always said “dey there dey jonz. All good things always come to an end.” She was right.
I turn on my car engine and drive back home slowly.
I quit drinking a long time ago so I just sit in bed and mope. I can’t even bring myself to cry. It’s his birthday today. Whoever that chic is, it is evident that she’s the main chic and I’m the side. Why else would he lie to me to spend his birthday with her?
There’s a knock on my front door but I can’t even bring myself to answer it. I’m sure whoever it is will go away when they’re tired. I can’t even be bothered.
The knocking is consistent for about 10 minutes and it gives me a headache. I finally get out of bed and open up. It’s Mirabel, Ojima’s sister. She looks at me and smiles
“Ojima hasn’t even been gone one day and you’re moping like a lost kitten.”
I can’t even answer her. If only she knows.
“Get dressed. Let’s go out.”
“No.”
Error. You never argue and win with Mirabel. She’s a bully. So thirty minutes later, I’m seated beside her as she drives, all the while thinking of how to tell her that her brother has broken my heart. We get to her house in no time and she finally turns to face me.
“Layo, what’s wrong?”
I sigh and shake my head.
“Ojima is cheating on me.”
The expression on her face is incredible.
“That’s impossible! You’re all that Ojima lives and breathes!”
I shake my head and my smile is a poorly crafted work of art by an unskilled artist
“He is. He…”
She interrupts me.
“Hold that thought. We’ll have this talk in my room. Let’s go.”
We get out of the car and she shuts the doors remotely. She holds my hand and we walk towards the house together.
She stops by the door and instructs me to go in.
“I think I left my phone in my car” she says.
I nod and open the door. I notice the candle lights first. And then the rose petals that trail from the door right down to the center of the room where the candle lights arranged in a heart shape surround Ojima who is down on a knee and holding a small box open. I stand and stare because I absolutely can not do anything else. His voice comes across the room a little coarse and uncertain.
“Layo, all good things come to an end so better things can begin. Will you marry me?”

Ogechi Nwobia

Ogechi Nwobia

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Comments 0

  1. hrh7 says:
    11 years ago

    Nice story. I assume this is fictional.
    So was he cheating on her or not?

    Reply
    • yougeecash says:
      11 years ago

      Thanks.
      What do you think? 🙂

      Reply
  2. adefunke62 says:
    11 years ago

    so, who is dt girl? or they just want her to b jealous

    Reply
    • yougeecash says:
      11 years ago

      Well…
      I’ll leave that one for you to figure out 😉

      Reply
  3. StupendousGrace says:
    11 years ago

    Loved this!!! Thanks Oge. Sometimes we concentrate on love gone wrong so much that we fail to share the good stories and we have a somewhat jaded view of love and life. Lesson about not judging prematurely too. Poor guy was setting up a surprise proposal. So glad she didn’t make a scene as hurt as she felt. Truly, all things good come to an end so that better things can begin.

    Reply
    • yougeecash says:
      11 years ago

      Thank you Eloho.
      You really did get it.
      Thank you! :*

      Reply
  4. enajyte says:
    11 years ago

    Awwww…cute. I see we’re back to mills and boon tiz abi?
    Trust is fragile, choosing to believe in someone is the best gift anyone can give to themselves.

    Reply
    • yougeecash says:
      11 years ago

      Loool! You ehn!!!
      Not every time call for blood, sometimes blush and be happy 😛

      Reply
  5. Isaacola AA says:
    11 years ago

    You are wicked Oge, see the twist! Didn’t see it coming. Good one.

    Reply
    • yougeecash says:
      11 years ago

      Haha!
      Thanks

      Reply
  6. Adeleke Julianah says:
    11 years ago

    Wow!!!! That’s the most beautiful Marriage Proposal…wonderful! *sighs and deep in tought* Hope mine will be better sha…*winks*

    Reply
    • yougeecash says:
      11 years ago

      Haha!
      I hope so too

      Reply
  7. imotolab2014 says:
    11 years ago

    first time reader. this is short but absolutely good. if it ends here i can say from beginning to end, as short as it was, it made sense. gracias. @isaacola AA, yh see the twist. she packed quite a punch in this story.

    Reply
    • yougeecash says:
      11 years ago

      Thanks! And welcome aboard!
      I hope you enjoy your time here 🙂

      Reply
  8. Regina de los Tejidos says:
    11 years ago

    brief, descriptive, direct and precise. Love the fact she did not mess it up with the predictable female tantrum. NICE

    Reply
    • yougeecash says:
      11 years ago

      Thank you!!

      Reply
  9. Yettie says:
    11 years ago

    Yaaaaaaaayyyyyy!!! *shoki*

    Reply
    • yougeecash says:
      11 years ago

      Lol!
      Thanks for being here Yettie

      Reply
  10. Lizzieebunoluwa says:
    11 years ago

    One word; Trust.

    Reply
    • yougeecash says:
      11 years ago

      You gat it!

      Reply
  11. Prince says:
    11 years ago

    Wow! Wow! Wow! …So better tins would come. This stiry already making me blush. Nice piece

    Reply
    • yougeecash says:
      11 years ago

      Gee!
      Thanks! 🙂

      Reply
  12. Zee says:
    11 years ago

    I love d way u write. …d way u tell seemingly common day to day happenings…keep it up. thanks for dis. it’s lovely

    Reply
    • yougeecash says:
      11 years ago

      Thanks Zee!
      🙂

      Reply
  13. hrh7 says:
    11 years ago

    *Reading from script*
    Hello fellow blogger! You have been nominated for a Liebster Blog Award by my beautiful self.
    For collection of the award, please go to my blog- http://www.insearchofperfecthair.wordpress.com to the same named article and follow the rules.
    *rolls up script*
    Congratulations!

    Reply
    • yougeecash says:
      11 years ago

      Lol.
      Thank you dear.
      I hope I can make out the time to get this done.
      Much appreciated

      Reply
  14. mopelola says:
    11 years ago

    thank you for this fiction, just what i needed at the moment.

    Reply
    • yougeecash says:
      11 years ago

      Aww.
      My pleasure
      Glad you enjoyed it.

      Reply
  15. Aniekan says:
    11 years ago

    Hmm. This ‘Anny’… 8-|

    Reply
    • yougeecash says:
      11 years ago

      Lol.
      What happened to him?

      Reply

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